tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post9008523487706108034..comments2010-05-10T01:08:45.723-07:00Comments on Vision Of Truth: #12: RUNAWAYAsmi's Journalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-69916863457119688602009-06-19T09:34:03.283-07:002009-06-19T09:34:03.283-07:00I do think you should get started on your story no...I do think you should get started on your story now without waiting for mine to end...because you never *when* this story is going to end. <br /><br />Good luck with your story! ThanksAsmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-3981920221664792852009-06-18T11:47:56.806-07:002009-06-18T11:47:56.806-07:00By the way Asmi!!! your novel is electrifying/oili...By the way Asmi!!! your novel is electrifying/oiling/firing-up my ambition to write a story too!!! :) But... first I'd like to complete yours!!!<br /><br />This is going lovely!!! Asmi row..... :DA. Alamgeerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13272580730431903894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-25134473436435117662009-06-17T13:05:46.801-07:002009-06-17T13:05:46.801-07:00[Why do I procrastinate on replying? -_-"]
@...[Why do I procrastinate on replying? -_-"]<br /><br />@Ellen: Aww, thanks ukhti! lol at looking up to the characters. :D of course you'll be a much better muslimah than any of them, inshAllah :)<br /><br />@Cool: Waleikom Assalam, thank you. When I become a famous author? rofl. You're praising me too much.of course I won't forget my blog friends! (fame or no fame) Thanks for your dua. :)<br /><br />@Sadiyah: Yeah, you better get moving with your's lol :P Thanks!<br /><br />@Nevin: Aww, thanks Nevin!Asmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-2172314080288182392009-06-16T14:57:48.361-07:002009-06-16T14:57:48.361-07:00OMG I LOVED IT! I LOOOVED how you described the be...OMG I LOVED IT! I LOOOVED how you described the beginning part and how she ran away! I just love it! I felt and pictured everything and i cant wait till you make moree! its so realistic!Nevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05591729058783551404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-79357525572111871462009-06-14T10:42:22.956-07:002009-06-14T10:42:22.956-07:00mashallah i looove this chapter!! your story is mo...mashallah i looove this chapter!! your story is motivating me to work on mine (i might use your idea for a blog for the story lol)<br /><br />looking foward to the next part<br /><br />take care sis <3Sadiyahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06278011922593060044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-51202883459065768692009-06-13T11:50:31.325-07:002009-06-13T11:50:31.325-07:00Assalamualaikum
SUBHANALLAH MASHALLAH is all i ca...Assalamualaikum<br /><b> SUBHANALLAH MASHALLAH is all i can say for the superb description and narration style of this particular chapter...very very good mate..keep it up.<br /><br /><i> And Asmi..one thing..when u become a famous author then dont forget us bloggers..just give a free copy to us...loool.</i></b><br /><br />take care..<br />May you achieve success and happiness in both the worlds...ameen.<br />~Cool Muslimah~CooL MuslimaHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10326682409235132583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-25802574242215382912009-06-13T07:13:12.463-07:002009-06-13T07:13:12.463-07:00Asmi!!! All chapters on one web-page??? It has bec...Asmi!!! All chapters on one web-page??? It has become so difficult for me to search my required chapters!!! :(A. Alamgeerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13272580730431903894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-35053963825222837202009-06-13T01:22:51.990-07:002009-06-13T01:22:51.990-07:00I loved the length of this chapter :D I wish Nur&#...I loved the length of this chapter :D I wish Nur's dad would just wake up... :(<br />The whole story is going along really well though. I love how you've written the female characters - every time I read about them, I honestly think "Oooh, if I become Muslim, I want to be just like them!" Hahahha. Aww, but seriously, it's a great story.ellen557https://www.blogger.com/profile/15241966768415648407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-83050652760144791942009-06-12T10:45:57.379-07:002009-06-12T10:45:57.379-07:00@Sir Adib: Thanks akhiy!
Oh yeah, that's a mi...@Sir Adib: Thanks akhiy!<br /><br />Oh yeah, that's a mistake - thanks for pointing it out. It's supposed to be "She put on an evil grin as *she* powdered her plastic face."Asmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-77249048801381106292009-06-11T18:14:20.442-07:002009-06-11T18:14:20.442-07:00Omg, this is one of the best I've ever read! I...Omg, this is one of the best I've ever read! I totally love how you described the scene in the beginning. Lovely!<br /><br />By the way, can you explain this line for me, please? "She put on an evil grin as powdered her plastic face."<br /><br />Keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16290311167695762085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-59603976220073943172009-06-11T09:41:07.508-07:002009-06-11T09:41:07.508-07:00Waleikum assalam Saafir!
Wow, 'awesomeness of...Waleikum assalam Saafir!<br /><br />Wow, 'awesomeness of intellectual writing' - thanks for the compliment :D<br /><br />Insha Allah, I'll post the next chapter faster this time,<br /><br />Yeah, poor Nur, she really is suffering,<br /><br />and about Nur's dad - children follow what their parents do, and Nur's dad isn't being such a great example. Though Nur is sad and lonely, what's keeping grounded to the Truth and goodness is her strong faith in Islam. If Nur went 'bad,' I'd be defeating the purpose of this story. (This is not a spoiler. It's just erm...assurance, I guess.)<br /><br />Thanks for the motivation akhiy! :DAsmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-58913716741274849992009-06-10T16:28:53.907-07:002009-06-10T16:28:53.907-07:00What? you kidding me? am already done reading this...What? you kidding me? am already done reading this chapter...<br /><br />Anywayz, Salaam Aleikum<br /><br /><b>Jazaka'Allah Khair for the awesomeness of your intellectual writing<br /></b><br /><br />It has been ages since you posted this chapter 'ope the others will not take long, Insha'Allah...<br /><br />Poor Nur 'ope she will pull it through...<br /><br /><i><br />Actually, it's quite depressing for children seeing their parents do acts(intentionally) such as what Nur's father is doing...what is he thinking 'socializing' with evil Jessica?</i>Saafirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509108544133175486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-8141162527000200132009-06-10T13:03:51.777-07:002009-06-10T13:03:51.777-07:00I know, Jessica is such a sucker! :P Something has...I know, Jessica is such a sucker! :P Something has to be done...<br />Lol, thanks Malekat :)Asmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-84880479190333670772009-06-10T12:57:02.770-07:002009-06-10T12:57:02.770-07:00awww poor nur!! i feel so ad for her. Jessica is S...awww poor nur!! i feel so ad for her. Jessica is SUCH a jerk!! i hate her! and what was nur's dad thinking to believe her?! <br />wow. i loved this chapter. Very well written asmi.<br />I hope things work out between nur and her father, and i hope jessica dies. ^-^<br /><br />btw lol @ your comment :P "3. Erm...there is no number 3. I just like odd numbers."<br /><br />:)Malekat_el7oriyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05512138531282714547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4032515185462273993.post-34904519637553302642009-06-10T10:53:48.168-07:002009-06-10T10:53:48.168-07:00[Author's note]
1. This is a really long chapt...[Author's note]<br />1. This is a really long chapter compared to the other chapters. <br />That should keep ya busy. Lol, don't worry, this time I'll get working on the next chapters faster, hehe. <br /><br />2. I hope I didn't overdo the descriptions. I did make a conscious try at it. >_><br /><br />3. Erm...there is no number 3. I just like odd numbers.Asmi's Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13058144417141960287noreply@blogger.com